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TsetsukenMusic

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Pro:
Very nice beat, I really thought it flowed with the "dark/evil" theme you are looking for
Nice choice of synth, reminds me almost of Super Mario 64 - Bowser's theme track which gives the same theme.
I really like it!
Con:
There's basically 2 things that I might have done to give the song more power:
I felt like the reverb on the drums were a little heavy for me (too over powering) and it took away from the sound
and EQ on the main synth I felt needed to be worked on, kind of like making it more sharp specially with the distortion already in play. With making the synth more on the sharp/higher end if you wanted to then balance that with a low end bass (3xosc should do the trick)!

Other than that I felt you nailed the dark/evil theme with the instrument choice and structure!

AEOK responds:

I feel ya. I was thinking the same thing about that higher register. Thanks for the feedback.

I really like the main bass/synth, very powerful sounding. I think the bell sounds...out of place maybe? Idk if there's effects you can get your hands on to play with it, to make the bell sound more full? Something I think that would make this track sound amazing would be an added drum track. doesn't have to be complicated at all, just something to compliment the rest of the song.

Believe it or not, I was making tracks that sounded fairly similar to this when I started in 2008/2009 (I Joined Newgrounds 2010) and look at what it became 6 years later! The more you play with your DAW the better you get (that goes with anything)

Anyways keep up the good work, I see potential!

Sheeepie2 responds:

Thanks :) I had a look at some of your recent tracks and I think they're great. I think I'm gettingbetter, especially in my last 4 or 5 submissions, but I'm still struggling in varying the sounds away from basic instruments and synths.

I'd like to start using more sound effects and stuff like that in my tracks, but I have no idea how I can do that in FL Studio. Again, thanks for the review :)

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Not bad for the amount of time in between you last submission! Gave me a little bit of a "Halloween" mood in the beginning. After the drop hits I like it sounds really well. The only thing I would say is that 1:28 synth sounds not really "smooth"? Kind of like it didn't fit well but that might just be me. Regardless very well done!
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Blackdoom13 responds:

That was the idea to keep it dark and errie sounding lol well the wubbing synth at that point is to kind of let you know whats coming kind of thing. Thanks alot for the review! Ive been looking for an actual review lol Thanks alot!

I really love the "harp" sound - it fits very well. Overall this is really good I love it!
At about 1:06 when it slows down a little bit and is my favorite part, keep it up!!!

Rinibra responds:

Thanks!

Emotional

This song I thought sounded the best out of thm all. Its very capturing and emotional. I read your review sorry it took so long. You should keep up the amazing work as well!

ToraXD001 responds:

Thanks a lot!! I had the initial melody for years before I even had any music software, so it was nice to make a song out of it!!

Awesomeness

Keep up the work man its pretty awesome

kayjay980 responds:

thanks :)

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